~ Albert Einstein
"It is in our lives and not our words that our religion must be read."
~ Thomas Jefferson
"Whatever words we utter should be chosen with care for people will hear them and be influenced by them for good or ill." ~ Buddha
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Wordless Wednesday~
"Peace and Love!"
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... Three Word Wednesday.... gait.. nudge.. ripen..
Loveless
one nudge of her lips
emotionless flames ripen
his goodnight gait stiff
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
9-22-2010
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I love getting comments.. but.. every once in a great great while I get a comment that I simply delete for being spam or its absolute rudeness.. I always copy and paste them so that I can save a copy.. and later I will look through them and those that were not just spam.. I will either answer the person.. the best I can without being rude in return.. or in a few rare cases I delete them permanently and forget it.. I love writing poems from word lists or word prompts.. I was always saying send me words and I'll write you a poem.. One morning I had what I thought was a rude comment and though I won't share the whole thing with you.. and NO I won't say who said it.. I have decided to share a tiny part of the comment with you and the poem I have written from their words...
~[ some mornings you make me sickest.. you can't write poems like you said.. (lots of curse words would go here )... words are.. thirst.. flick and pecker-ed.. See what you can do with those smarty pants...and don't write me no sissy ocean poem neither... ]
and so dear reader.. here is your poem.. I pray that it won't make you sickest(?).. and if it does......
{ a senryu}
Thirst
wishes one penny
swore ancient wood-pecker-ed board
I flicked in a dime..
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
9-22-2010
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and now that I had thirst on my mind.. I was thinking...
{an American Sentence poem}
"Thirsting for more than water..."
~ if I had a nickel for every quarter I tossed into a well..
9/22/2010
Today I wrote a few things... cleared out some old saved comments that weren't allowed to stay on my blog.. rode with mama.. talked to my friend and sister-in-law who has been very ill.. did laundry.. mine his and his.. fed the puppies their very first chow.. worked on a yellow hat.. drank a pot of coffee.. made tea and lemonade for the men.. answered the phone a gazillion times... looked up some stuff.. stalked facebook.. played some games.. and pretty much did nothing.. wait.. I walked the dogs and gathered eggs if that counts?.. but best of all... I wrote.. I feel better when I write something each day.. it's like as the words leave my pen I relax and let things go.. I really do have to try to write something every day.. I can get nasty after a few days..
Thanks for stopping by today.. I hope you laughed.. Have a great day!
Patsy
8 comments:
Nice work. There are some people that must be ignored. ;) Some that are the salt of the earth. Amazing, isn't it!
A nice haiku! And the quotes rock -- three of my favorite people! :)
I hope the commenter wasn't part of the 3WW community. Yours is what you make of the words.
Wonderful words and pleasure to visit! :o)
guess your commenter forgot the words that we all learned as children.... if you can't say something nice don't say anything at all. Keep doing what makes you feel good.+
Peace and love. Two of my favorite things. Two of my favorite lil people! Hook 'em as Daddy would say! Not the words..or the lil people. Just the commenter. That person obviously was having a bad day and needed a coke and a suprise visit from an old friend. Bless their heart and move on - you're much better than that!
Liked reading your post. Will visit you more often..
baton of time
You know we have to continue to do our bit.. keep every thing we receive for its with some pupose God has sent it to us.. after feeling it fully we can let go of whatever we wish to.. life becomes a lot more beautiful.. and ofcourse dirt needs to be cleaned up.. I liked your write..
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