"Like a welcome summer rain, humor may suddenly cleanse and cool the earth, the air and you." - Langston Hughes
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One Shot Poetry Wednesday – Week 39
Claustrophobic-
on the elevator
going down or up
hiding the attic
squeezing spotted pup
I hate those musty minutes
no fresh air to be found
on the elevator
going up or down
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
3-30-2011
We write Poems Prompt #47
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3 comments:
AWESOME POEM
nice. i hear you. the second stanza really opens this up...nice one shot
i took the ride here...and gulped for fresh air...great one shot...cheers pete
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