~ Louise Beal
"We see what we believe rather than believe what we see."
~ Alan Watts
"God is a comedian playing to an audience too afraid to laugh."
~ Voltaire
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This week has started out rather slowly.. waking up this morning I was sure that this week has already been three months long.. by my figuring it should be August or September by now and it's only Tuesday!! I wonder why time does that to us some days.. It's as if it stops and lets us stew in our own juices for a few hours or even sometimes days.. and even stranger is the fact that even though today was three years long.. I haven't had enough time to accomplish any of the things I needed to do.. Maybe I am moving in slow motion to match the days?... Thankfully I did find time.. in between dog walking and laundry.. to write a few words..
~ A Picture is worth a thousand words.. or so we have been told.. this meme is one of my Favorites.. I am hoping that they will be back in the swing of things soon with new photo prompts.. but in the meantime they have a lot of great prompts in their Archives.. Today I wrote a haiku from one of their prompts.... I love this great photo by PJOnori... as I looked at the man in the photo I wondered what troubles held him still on the polished pew.. what burdens caused him to seek
Lost in Thought
silently sitting
pleading prayers unspoken
palms kneed sycamore
written By: Patricia Sawyer
6-22-2010
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I have also been learning to write another type of poem.. I am always amazed that there are so many different types.. I am always searching to try to find a new type to share with my poetry club.. These are really very simple to write.. I am talking about a Sentu.. A Syntu is a special type of short poem that originated in Japan... Syntus are special to me because they are written about the earth. I love the earth and complain loudly about all the things mankind does that harms it.. I am planning to challenge each member of the poetry club to write their own "earth poem".. As with most poetry.. There are certain rules for writing a syntu. Writing such a poem is one way of describing something and telling your feelings about it. Syntus have 5 lines and the following are the rules for writing each line:
Line 1. One word only- the name of the geological feature you are writing about.
Line 2. A scientific observation about line 1, using only one of your senses (sight, touch, hearing, taste, smell).
Line 3. A thought, feeling, or evaluation about line 1.
Line 4. Another observation about line 1, using a different sense from the one you used in line 2.
Line 5. A one-word meaning for line 1.
Line 1. One word only- the name of the geological feature you are writing about.
Line 2. A scientific observation about line 1, using only one of your senses (sight, touch, hearing, taste, smell).
Line 3. A thought, feeling, or evaluation about line 1.
Line 4. Another observation about line 1, using a different sense from the one you used in line 2.
Line 5. A one-word meaning for line 1.
Though I have just began to learn about these special poems I have written a few.. These are my own Sentu...
vacation~
ocean
crashing waves crest untamed
mysterious, tumultuous, inspiring, vast
barefoot footprints, castle, relaxed peace
sea
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
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salt marsh~
marsh
hear the rattle of the clapper rail
buffer of strong seas
grassy refuge of the great egret
wetlands
written by: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
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Underground~
cave
dark tunnels
formations of magnitude and beauty
voices echo
grotto
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
vacation~
ocean
crashing waves crest untamed
mysterious, tumultuous, inspiring, vast
barefoot footprints, castle, relaxed peace
sea
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
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salt marsh~
marsh
hear the rattle of the clapper rail
buffer of strong seas
grassy refuge of the great egret
wetlands
written by: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Underground~
cave
dark tunnels
formations of magnitude and beauty
voices echo
grotto
Written By: Patricia Sawyer
6-15-2010
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I hope you have enjoyed your visit to my blog today! Feel free to leave me a comment .. Have a wonderful day!
Patsy
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