Wednesday, March 30, 2011

One Shot Wednesday

"Like a welcome summer rain, humor may suddenly cleanse and cool the earth, the air and you." - Langston Hughes

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One Shot Poetry Wednesday – Week 39


Claustrophobic-

on the elevator
going down or up

hiding the attic
squeezing spotted pup

I hate those musty minutes
no fresh air to be found

on the elevator
going up or down

Written By: Patricia Sawyer
3-30-2011

We write Poems Prompt #47

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Patsy

3 comments:

ACEBiggaveli said...

AWESOME POEM

Brian Miller said...

nice. i hear you. the second stanza really opens this up...nice one shot

Pete Marshall said...

i took the ride here...and gulped for fresh air...great one shot...cheers pete